Love is an awesome burden
that weigh heavily on the heart
Though given with sincerity
and affection nothing is
gauranteed
You risk extreme vulnerability
as you put your whole life
on the line
It takes two for love to grow,
without reciprocal emotion
an committment,
like a fragile flower love
will wilt and die.
Leaving you lost and confused
never ever wanting again to try
So many people take for granted
the love you give from your soul
They betray the trust you place
in them and rip your heart apart
Love is a serious thing for
which many don't truly understand
Thats why I hate falling in love
because its so hard on a good man
Author notes
2. tell me the things that you hate about love.
A contest entry
- Give me something origional by SouthernDownpour.
1183 points, ended August 12, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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These words ring true...it really is hard on a good person period. To fall in love while the partner plays with your emotions & heart....excellent write...
novy
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ohh what better then hating love it's self?
I thought this was a great piece. mmm these lines couldnt be any more beautiful.
"like a fragile flower love
will wilt and die.
Leaving you lost and confused
never ever wanting again to try"
good luck in the contest
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WOW
wow I like this poem I can relate to it very much at the moment, this is a talented piece
I love this verse the best!
"like a fragile flower love
will wilt and die.
Leaving you lost and confused
never ever wanting again to try"
Outstanding poem I have to say thanks for sharing it's helped in many ways because I am going though a difficult time.
blessed be
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