holding-- --the broken string
to a wayward
~~kite
…fading away…
Author notes
10 words to, Thoughts of myself
A contest entry
- Describe yourself once more in 10 words { The Best of the Best } by Noir mariposa...x.
1600 points, ended August 14, 2008, 40 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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So sad !!
Gosh, the imagery of it was amazing though. Gorgeously (is that a word? is now) penned... first poem in this so far this contest to leave me speechless
Thank you for taking the time to enter!
I wish you the best of luck
Claire x -
You pack a powerful punch in your poetry of few words.
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I really like this and the words and the way you set it out made it so capitvating.
A wonderful write that created lovely imagery, I wish you all the best in this contest.
Rose -
You always say so much in few words. This was intense and
captivating.
Good luck in the contest.
Love
Nor
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I always am holding onto fading things, too, Mally
Succinct...
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You are known for that gift of capturing so much in few syllables, and here..... you do it once again
I love this. It is so you
Lynda
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