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My Little Box of Rain

My little box of rain
Hidden in my head
Along with all my secrets
And things I've never said
My little box of rain
Sweet, but still so sad
The hidden drops of sorrow
Darken it a tad
My little box of rain
You never see the clouds
No thunder and no lightning
Only sadness is allowed
If my eyes look watery
And a bit out of place
You'll get to see my box of rain
Falling on my face

Author notes

Thx for reading I hope this is out of the box enough but if not i guess you can DQ me but that would make me sad......UNLESS! you mean Dairy Queen then thats fine. lol you've just read my attempt to be funny I have probably failed though
This is kind of like a sister poem to my other one (Raining On My Face)
I hope you enjoyed, but if not thats okay too

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  • rosie4491
    August 7, 2008

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    Awww! Yes I love this poem very much! It is QUITE creative. And for someone so young it is truly lovely to see such a wonderful pen! BEST of luck.

    Keep it up!!! =]