Her hazel eyes cold,
"I've been raped".
Telling her story.
A contest entry
- Describe yourself once more in 10 words { The Best of the Best } by Noir mariposa...x.
1600 points, ended August 14, 2008, 40 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
.[™].I'm.Dakota.Bay.Bee.Don't.Forget.Me.[™].
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I'm so sorry to hear that
I think you've said a rather sad tale in the ten short words... my heart goes to you.
Thank you for entering,
I wish you luck
once again
Claire x
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Awww this is so meloncholic through three short simple lines... I give you my sympathy hun best of luck in the contest
~Emily~ xx
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It's amazing how you've fitted such a sad tale in only 10 words. hugs
A wonderful write that created lovely imagery, I wish you all the best in this contest.
Rose -
babe short strong
i love you
keep your head up high
your an amazing girl
you best know i love you mucho..xoxo
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This is good, you could also switch around the last line to "the story they(the eyes) told" if you wanted to sneak a rhyme in there too.
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-sad face-
It'll all be ok sweetie. I find that you shouldn't use these words to define you and who you are. It's just a part of what you've gone through. It does not define who you are in the slightest. I love you,sweetie. -hugs tight-
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Oh goodness
I shouldn't have read this...
hugs and kisses my dear one.
wolf
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