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Whiter Than The Snow

A heart defiled,
Needing to be pure,
A mouth full of words
That should not have been.
You alone can make me clean...
Wash me whiter than the snow,
Purge my soul from every stain,
Set me free to live again...
Free to laugh and free to dance,
With joy overflowing
From the depths of my heart,
Lifting my spirits to heights
I've never known.

Author notes

Inspired by the quote: "O God! now there is no other soap except you to make me wash."

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  • Ryno
    November 16, 2008
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    not feeling it
    ~prewrites, come and get them


  • BonnieQ silver member
    July 28, 2008

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    The World's Prayer

    Such a prayer that every Human should utter in humility and confession, then everyone would be saved. All who write for our awesome Father and His Christ are, indeed, blessed and already a winner.

    BonnieQ

    • harriet567
      July 28, 2008
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      Thank you so much

      Thank you, Bonnie, for such a wonderful comment - that this should be the World's Prayer. God bless you too, Love, Harriet


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    July 27, 2008

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    Ah..what a depth and what a prayer you worded here..I love it...well done..and my thanks for sharing such a wonderful write...

  • kamulneix
    July 25, 2008
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    Very good.

    Very uplifting to me considering the tough times I've had...........Keep up the good work......

    • harriet567
      July 26, 2008
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      Thanks

      Thank you for your comment - I'm so pleased my poem encouraged you. God bless, Harriet

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