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I Cried




I cried for you last night
Hot tears burning my eyes
Thinking of what I’ve lost
And the joy we’ll never share

I cried for me last night
Memories burning my cheeks
Knowing that you’ll never be mine,
To hold in arms, that long for you

I loved the thought of you
Of us, a life, that would be stable
I saw that vanish before my eyes
And I cried



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You were my heart and now that is gone... what is there left to live for? How can this pain, ever be okay? How do I leave a piece of me behind and walk forward? How... do I stop loving you?

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  • angel19
    December 3, 2008

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    Emotionally stimulating

    I really liked this! It makes me curious though about what memories you're referring to. I can understand these emotions and it leaves me wanting to know more about the situation and why the relationship never came to be. Great verbs! Very descriptive


  • Erika Garcia
    November 14, 2008
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    truthfuL

    umm i am speechless. it really expresses what your tring to say. great work. keEp iT uP.
    Erika