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ten words.

Unruly mess of hopes and mistakes, tethered to his heart.

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not very good.

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  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    August 7, 2008

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    Yep, have too agree with the other two commentator's here. I personally think this is a very good write; it just describes ... "us" as a normal lot perfectly

    Thanks for entering!
    I wish you the best of luck
    Claire x


  • The-Choke
    July 28, 2008

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    I agree with illusions of faith. It's really challenging to do so much with so little, but I think you did a great job.


  • Never.Give.Up silver member
    July 26, 2008

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    Not very good? You created a picture that has alot of feeling and truth it was amazing.

    A wonderful write that created lovely imagery, I wish you all the best in this contest.

    Rose