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2 Cool

I'm 2 cool 4 you
so I said goodbye 2 you
and said hellow 2 someone else
so now when I pass you in the hallway
you don't hear me but I call you a LOSER!
sorry to say but all your friends call you that
and now that we are apart I see that they are right
so now all i've got to say to you is i'm 2 cool 4 you!!!!!

have you ever had this happen to you????

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  • jadeangyal
    July 25, 2008

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    I liked the staircase form of the poem, and I liked how you repeated the first line at the end. Nice story.


  • kiki-bunny23
    July 25, 2008

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    YOu might want to be more literate and not use numbers [1,2,3...ect] and instead spell out the words [one, two, three...ect]