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~Blank Pages~

Pastel pleasures seasoned with
a hint of pixy dust,
candied visions of illuminated
childhood dreams.

Orbs of light transpired by
particles of sunlight promenading around
imaginations harvested from magical innocence.
Illustrations penciled on notes
of creativity as muses glide down rainbow trails.

Ceramic apples house hopes and dreams
as blank pages unfold for verses to debut,
creating precocious delights.

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Wondering by manips-of-artist2

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  • echo-ink
    August 8, 2008
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    Wonderful take on the prompt you had for this contest, I loved this, thanks for entering and good luck.

    PL


  • Deathless Kris
    August 5, 2008
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    this is such an amazing take on a dream world.loved it :]


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 26, 2008

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    "Candied visions" made me think of toffee apples

    A wonderfully metaphoric take on the picture, capturing innocence and dreams that we all have had.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    July 26, 2008

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    A beautifully penned poem. The idea of that little apple houseing all our hopes and dreams is an excellent one, a very creative take on the picture. Thank you so much for entering and good luck


  • luna-midnight gold member
    July 25, 2008
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    aww good luck im sre youll do a lovely write for it

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