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twisted

happy nonconformist
laughing at life
and how wrong
everyone is.

A contest entry

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  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    August 7, 2008

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    Sounds like me at the moment ^^
    Like the idea of the back ground and just the words in general; well done

    Thanks for entering!
    I wish you the best of luck
    Claire x


  • Never.Give.Up silver member
    July 26, 2008

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    WOW, I love how the heading and background conflict together at frist glance and then reading the poem everything falls into place.

    A wonderful write that created lovely imagery, I wish you all the best in this contest.

    Rose


  • individuality gold member
    July 25, 2008

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    a wonderful piece of poetry which travels into new dimensions and finds the light of love and strength. we have to laugh at life and dance across the points.