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this is me

a stray moon beam
without direction
a fragile broken stream

A contest entry

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  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    August 7, 2008

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    Oh wow, this is so nicely penned
    Imagery is gorgeous, as Kate said, it paints such a strong image ... so wow lol

    Thank you for entering,
    I wish you the best of luck
    Claire x


  • Hello...No.One.Home silver member
    July 26, 2008

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    With 10 words you've made a thousand images come alive in my mind.

    A wonderful write and I wish you all the best in this contest.

    Rose


  • Devilish Temptation
    July 25, 2008

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    Powerful, Beautiful verse
    it speaks a thousand words!
    talented too
    I wish I could give you happy cheers but I am saving up for a contest!
    blessed be