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Sleazoid

Vulgar reactions control me
Towards unfamiliar feelings
Shattering my shields

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10 words on myself again. I might want to try again, but seriously, I feel like cheating when I do it more than once.

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  • Malabu
    August 14, 2008

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    i feel this is an excellent write
    your emotions draw a vivid image to surreal
    tearing down your defences of a happy heart

    so be my thoughts to yours
    i like this


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    August 7, 2008

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    ((Don't worry, I feel like that if I enter more than once too in contests.... ))

    Such a sad write, I like the last line of "Shattering my shields" not sure why, but it appeals too me ^^

    Thank you for entering!
    I wish you the best of luck
    Claire x


  • Hello...No.One.Home silver member
    July 26, 2008
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    So brutally honest.

    A wonderful write and I wish you all the best in this contest.

    Rose