Broken

Dented by the spiteful lies embedded in her broken heart

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Describe yourself once more in 10 words { The Best of the Best } by Noir mariposa...x. 1600 points, ended August 14, 2008, 40 entries
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Noir mariposa...x
August 6, 2008

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Awww what a sad write and very deep in its wording for the first cap off the rank

Thank you for entering ^^
I wish you the best of luck
Claire x

Never.Give.Up
July 25, 2008

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Awww... That is so sad

A beautifully sad peom and I wish you all the best in this contest.

Rose

right now

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