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Falling

I perch precariously on the edge of reason,
swaying gently in the breeze of thought and sending silent wishes to the stars.
Wanting to say more, but knowing it is dangerous to unravel my world.
And risk falling.

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  • LivinitupCutie
    July 26, 2008

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    Short but it's all there needed to say..leaves me speechless..I love how you portray your thoughts into this..interesting and fascinating to read...thank you for entering my contest and good luck!!!

    Keep penning!!!
    Lieu

  • aaaaaaaa
    July 25, 2008

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    hmmmm I really like this. love how you lead into the second line with the first, and the thought of "sending silent wishes to the stars". great write.