We enter the room,
Fall back on the bed,
Ready to celebrate
Having been wed.
With one hand on her back,
The other—her face,
Her lips I’m dying
To again taste.
The passion between us
Is not hard to see.
I can think of no one
With whom I’d rather be.
She unbuttons my shirt
As I start to raise hers.
I kiss her neck
As she starts to purr.
I grope her breast,
She clenches my chest,
Her nails dig in deep,
My blood starts to seep.
Our breaths grow heavy,
Sweat beads off her brow.
She begins to moan—
Sweet moans aloud.
I kiss her stomach,
Her nails through my hair.
Passion as ours
Is terribly rare.
Her out of her skirt,
I out of my jeans,
We gawk at each other
Like a couple of teens.
She tugs at my boxers,
I—her panties and bra.
I admire her beauty
In extreme awe.
I kiss her softly;
She kisses back gently:
Her wrapped in my arms,
I trapped in her charms.
Our hearts pounding,
Emotions mounding,
Her eyes say, “Please,”
So, gently in, I ease.
Outside, it storms,
Begins to rain;
Inside, she shakes,
Takes the Lord’s name in vain.
I get lost in her eyes,
And see thunder and lightning.
It’s greatly delighting
And erotically frightening.
She hangs on for life,
Nails clawing my back:
My sweet little sexy
Nymphomaniac.
She arches her back
And closes her eyes.
She says, “Baby, harder,”
And the pleasure magnifies.
I hold back,
Trying not to succumb,
Then I drive harder
Until softly she comes.
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Comments
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Wow. I love this. I esp. liked the imagery. You showed how much the characters cared for each other. Lovely write, Scott. <3
-Trisha
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That was REALLY good. I don't read alot of this kind, but I enjoyed this. It's beautifuly passionate and sweet. I loved it. You did an amazing job.
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I usually don't ten to care for poetry in the "erotica" category because it's usually distasteful in my opinion, but this piece is different. It's very well written and not overly detailed
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Thank you for sharing this in my contest! -
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Thank you for your comment! I also find erotic writes to be too...explicit, if you will. They tend to advocate lust instead of glorifying the beauty of love and sexuality. I wanted to write something more expressing the beauty thereof than to "excite" the reader. Thank you.
--Genesis.
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This is soft and leaves the mind to do the dirty work To be loved so deeply in the arms of wedding bless. Lovely, and good luck.
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This is really beautiful! Nothing smutty or pornographic, just the beauty of MARRIED LOVE as God intended it! Well written! And HOTT too! I need to find me a wife!!! Or DIE OF STARVATION!!!
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