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Drifting Eyes

Drifting eyes,
            Losing focus.
Changing the,
          Goals.
Losing          form.
    Lost of,
                    Sleep.
Turning  Tides.
    Change of,
                  Love.
Outlook on      life,
      Different.
These          drifting,
    Eyes.
          Lost of,
Pain.
    All Changing.
I    am        tired.

Author notes

a poem about how I am sleepy, it shouldn't be the greatest since it's 4 in the morning and I haven't slept in hours. Hope you enjoy though! I'm going to bed now n.n

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  • peregrin
    July 27, 2008

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    I like the way it is written out, that is cool...
    lol
    I sound like I am two.
    Anyway, I like it, I think it is purdy.


  • Dani M.paz
    July 26, 2008

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    Hehe I told you to go to sleep(sounds like a mother)
    but it was pretty fun
    you:theres no way im going to sleep
    me:Go to sleep or ill bite your neck.


    • xXDarkChildXx
      July 26, 2008
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      I was not gonna go to sleep!!!!!! I loved staying up though x3 cause I got to talk to you.

      • Dani M.paz
        July 29, 2008
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        Well i know,but i made you go to sleep hehe,hehe and i should stop apearing only at night,but i made you go to sleep so boo hehe.


  • black hearted rebel
    July 25, 2008

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    I like it..lol..and I especially love the way you wrote it!It adds to the poem making it even more wonderful!A pretty good job for a sleepy person

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