"De(F/S)ire in the Sky"
It may pain you to watch the fireworks
When you’re next to her
They burst in the sky with such beauty
While she burst next to you
With even more
They appear suddenly out of darkness
Coloring the dark sky
Just like your
Desire
But they burn out, and fade away
Tortuously and agonizingly slow
Like when she leaves your side
Leaving only a Smokey shadow
That you can reminisce about
But not to extensively
It to will fade away
Just like your
Desirer never
Will
Do
Author notes
option 1
A contest entry
- The Prompt Coffee House: Prompt Challenge Round 1: Picture Prompts by Ceridwens Soul.
1050 points, ended August 4, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A awesome use of the prompt. A wonderful comparison of beauty.
'They appear suddenly out of darkness
Coloring the dark sky
Just like your
Desire'
stunning use of artistry.
Thank you for sharing with us
Jem and Ju
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i loved this piece... i am not sure what the pic is but i do not care to look... i want to keep the image you made in my mind... lovely...
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Thank you for entry, good luck!
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