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My Needs

A contest
of love and lust,
unanimous,
real contact
it chills my bones,
dead beat tones,
Decisions
fork in the road,
let's break the code!

Backward street signs
lead me in the
right direction,
buried deep
beneath your bones
I need some help...

Beside you
I feel so weak,
inanimate!
Help me out
while i repeat
everything!
don't tell me
you were right
you'll pay tonight...

Backward street signs
lead me in the
right direction,
buried deep
beneath your bones
I need some help...

Continue
what you started,
i need saving,
corruption,
101,
just carry on,
barricade
your self in
so you can't get out!

Backward street signs
lead me in the
right direction,
buried deep
beneath your bones
I need some help...

Help, I'm trapped
I'm in need of
your menatality,


Well if I really wanted,
to bite the hand that feeds,
I would definitely be,
far smarter about it!

ya much smarter about it!



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don't knwo where this came from...

A contest entry

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  • lindaburns gold member
    July 26, 2008

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    Judge:
    This is probably good but I feel I don’t fully under stand it. I’m not sure it follows the rule of complete sentences and correct punctuation. This is another one I will leave in at least for now because it’s good.