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Jinx

The crew says I am just a jinx
and that's not fair... I am a cat.
The capt'n is my master here
and I am privileged... that is that.

Aye, black I am and pirate bred.
Don't ask me how, for it's been years
and 'ol Tim Black, aye, he is dead.
I won't say more 'cause of the fears.

Me tail is missin' from the brawl
that 'appened on one stormy night.
Me wits I've kept and that's not all
but what I have is out of sight.

I know where the best treasures lie,
on islands reaching 'round the seas.
I'll not tell ye, 'cause you'd try
to dig 'em up, aye, if ye please.

I am the capt'n's only cat
and I am privileged... that is that.

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Pink Pony

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  • Oh, that's really good! Very vivid and the full of character.


  • Roaddog Wolf
    July 25, 2008

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    Now this is really a different take on the prompt and I like it allot. it read very smoothly with good rhyme. Good rhyme


    Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.


  • individuality gold member
    July 25, 2008

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    a good piece of poetry which flows along with a smooth rhythm and stylish rhyme, i can just imagine now the cat on the shoulder with an eye patch


  • Periwinkle Blue
    July 25, 2008

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    OH! My Pirate Sis... this poem is so much fun to read! A cat! OOOPS!