A look of longing I do see
Garnered with sensuality
Breast to breast we entwine
To savor love so sublime.
Author notes
Option#9: two hearts one soul. (Rhyme)
Picture/art credit goes to: poetic-enigma21
A contest entry
- Set your muse and mine- lot of options by poetic-enigma21.
450 points, ended August 6, 2008, 23 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very nice for such a short piece I love the way you describe it breast to breast.. It shows that they are conjoined by the heart.. I love it :]
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Congratulations on another well deserved Gold dear
the only way I can applaud you twice
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Short, sweet, and beautiful. Congrats on the Gold.
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a pretty poem
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oh so very beautiful
i was waiting for someone to write on this option
and you have done it so beautifully
i wish i could read more
its so lovely
thanks for sharing
cheers
shilpa am giving two applauds coz i jus have 2 left , but it deserves all the five
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Aww now that is just lovely! Certainly speaks of love and the entwining of souls is a beautiful way!
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Beautiful dear! Your words and the picture compliment each other perfectly.
Best wishes in the contest.
Love Margaret
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You have encompassed love beautifully in so few words. Juls
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I'd like to see more of this poem...somehow it seems like a beginning rather than a finished piece all by itself...I like what I do see though!
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Lovely little snippet from your mind poet. C
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