i always wanted to dance in the rain
and kiss your fingers at dawn
you asked time and time again
just whose side i was on
but i thought it was obvious…
so i stayed awake all night
and listened to you sleep
you look to handsome, yes you do
when you're dreaming oh so deep
i can feel your body move
as you're lying on your side
your back is turned, i don't know why
and i almost want to cry
i think it's you i love
but i'm not sure just where
touch me, kiss me, rub my head
run your fingers thru my hair
i love it, yes. i love your touch
i love the way you stare
i love it when you kiss my neck
and nothing's said, but i know you care
i love the morning and i love the night
i love our pictures and when in sight,
i cringe.
i fall.
to you
for you
giving…
my all.
Author notes
kinda about someone but then kinda not. there's a purpose for the non-capitalized "I's"... it's like talking to someone, i suppose.
let me know if it's good, snazzy, rad, etc. whatev!
Comments
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this one is amazzzing.
every line is exploding with raw emotion.
you really held on to me thru the entire piece.
i gringe.
i fall.
to you
for you
giving...
my all.
perfect ending...GREAT JOB!
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Made me feel all warm and gooey .Nice write
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