Stalks, prowling in shadows
it has no features, yet, it has a name.
Gaveyard mysteries devouring
innocent minds; screeching
demonic, torturous being.
Takes hold in terror filled dreaming
cold nightmarish wanderings
agitated, anticipation, the trepidation of dread.
Shadow stalking with overwhelmingly sinister festivity
misty polluted mind thoughts, uninvited;
anxiety attacks fuel panic state of existence.
Stalks prowling in shadows of hallucinatory imaginings
feeds in the darkened corridors of life.
Yes it has a name, by definition instilling
horror, terror, evil thinking night shows
features of unseen creatures parade
with cold foreboding sentiment.
No matter how you say the name it is,
fear, страх, crainte, furcht.
He said, ‘ Fear not for I am with you’.
Author notes
Just kicking it around. Fear, crpax, crainte,and furcht in any language is still fear.
FEAR
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You show your expertise in languages, and imagery as you weave the characteristics of fear throughout this wonderful write! Stalking is a characteristic of that element of fear that encroaches on someone bound by fears....An enlightening look at fear...Wonderful write!
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Dayum!! And here I was thinking it was the hair I clean outta my hairbrush
This is very chilling and VERY well written. You kicked it around alright and made an awesome piece of poetry. 
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I fear to lack the words to salute this piece as I am humbled before it.
A lot of thought went in to this awesome piece of poetry. "it has no features, yet it has a name" wow! I really appreciate the vocabulary chosen here, for a subject not as easy to describe, as it might seem.
You have an excellent job here. Bravo!Ron *wolf*
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Excellent
Such discriptive content in this one. Excellent conclusion also. Expresses the fear that courses the veins and drives us to the hieghts of madness and yet there is a relief. Great job hun. Don
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Excellent
Wow, this is some kicking around. So very done. You sure did pen something great expressions with this one
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Oh wonderful! And that last line! Wow! Such a neagtive piece turned right aroung with that last line!Oh I am sure there are so many of us who can relate to these emotions! Excellent write brimming with stunning imagery
You kicked it round real good
Gaylene
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Just kicking it around, aye?
I'd say you must have big feet cause you kick it pretty dog gone good! Really a very good write, penned with the heir of a talented poetess for sure.
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lol Fear is all the same no matter what the word is you use! Sis you da bomb!
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Love the word mix. Describing all the shadows we carry around of fear.
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We Are Not Alone
Anxiety and deceit - trickery... truely something we all fight and very well ignited in this poem.
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