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Cutting Edge

Crystal clear, razor sharp
Pressed against fair silken skin
Cut strings on a harp
Nothing but this could be sin

Red rubies drip down the arm
Razor edge dragged across metal
Cutting thorns, causing harm
Nothing ever feeling dull

Sparkling diamonds fall down the face
Spiraling toward whispered shadow
Weaving through threads of lace
Satin ribbon cut to show


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  • beautiful


  • XcupcakesX
    August 26, 2008
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    wow i love this. It's so wounderful. Amazing write.


  • HereComesTheSun
    July 26, 2008
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    fantastic this is just amazing the best so far major tanent. but it does scar the shit out of me tell me you are okay luv youuu


  • Mistress Masquerade
    July 25, 2008

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    This. Scares. The. Sh*t. Out. Of. Me. Please tell me you're not going down that road.. Please you know I've been there... No no no no.. I love you Ducky!!!


    • Broken Vow
      July 25, 2008
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      this poem was written a couple weeks ago but never got on here because i was at camp. so its not happening now...

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