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Flows


love flows so freely
heart of a natural man
girl held so dearly
sharing the light that we can
before all life hits the fan









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Tanka

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  • azure85 gold member
    August 7, 2008

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    A very nice tanka that reflects the love between two, and the cherished memory of the moment. Thank you so much!


  • iamlost gold member
    August 6, 2008

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    An interesting twist at the end there, and a nice rhyme as well. I do like those last two lines, a well written tanka. Best of luck in the contest!