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A Daughters Final Thought

Background by: x-Black-Butterfly-x aka Char 

 

The torment you put me through

makes me so very mad.

The decisions you make me make,

are altogether sad.

 

I hate you for so many reasons

and yet I still love you all the same.

For so many years now

all I have felt is shame.

 

So many questions I have for you

yet your answers I do not care for.

I don't want to hear one single word

but still I beg for more.

 

The decision is mine to make

to see your face again.

But I see your face in my sleep

and my body pumps my adrenaline.

 

I am so confused now

and don't know what to do.

But one thing is for sure

I can't stand the thought of you. 

 

Author notes

I can only imagine what you are going through Char, for this was your father who had done these things to you. I can only know some of your feelings, for my step father did the same to me, but still, it was not my real father. The feelings have to be altogether different in that aspect. But from me to you, I am so sorry that you had to go through this. It's nothing any child or any human being at that, should have to witness or go through. You are a very special woman, and you deserve all the respect in the world. I love you little one. Please always know that. This is for you honey.

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  • ImmatureRebel
    July 25, 2008
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    That is so sweet.... keep writing!


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    July 25, 2008

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    it is true, I do still love hm I was always his little girl and princess and nothing would ever change that but at the end of the day he took advantage and that left me with a piece of me hating him with such anger. so powerfully written, you captured it amazingly. well done and thankies for entering


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    July 24, 2008

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    A very sad but well thought out
    write. It's terrible to be in such
    a situation. You did wonders with
    this prompt and I hope that you do
    well with it in this contest my friend!
    Take care and keep up the wonderful
    work here!




    Jeremy0826


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    July 24, 2008

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    I too, think that Char will relate to this one. It's the classic "I want nothing from you...but I want everything" the confusion of knowing what to do or say, I really can relate to myself as well. Very well wrote and raw emotions! Sweet