I'm so damn fed up,
with everything.
I just wish the world
could stop for a minute,
and see reality.
Skinny little preppy whores,
flaunting their nasty asses everywhere.
I just want to puke,
I'm not skinny, I have curves.
What the hell is wrong with that?
My doctor tells me,
you are a little overweight.
You fucking idiot,
you don't tell a traumatized teenage girl
shes fat.
I can't go anywhere without weird looks.
I walk into the shopping mall,
looking in my size
and everyones staring at me,
almost like they are mocking me,
with their putrid glares
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good job!
vivid depiction of the illusions typical of anorexia. -
This is a very honest write. And yeah, I think society's standards for "beauty" are pretty ridiculous
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HELL YEAH! those skinny whores have no right to look at you like you're less than them b/c you are real and you're better than those raunchy, fake, barbies! those skinny wanna bees aren't worth your time and they're all gonna die from starvation in about a month anyways
peace, love, & chees -
you tell them Molly.. that's right speak your mind. there is something wrong with the world.. your mother isn't skinny by any means of the word.. as a teenager I was told something similar. and I can tell you it messed me up for the rest of my teenage years well into adulthood. words like that, are cruel.. there should be no place for them..
unfortunately the world doesn't seem to care does it? well there are those of us, who can relate to this all too well.. I care about you..
I love you
mommy
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Wow
Straight off the bat this stanza got to me:
Skinny little preppy whores,
flaunting their nasty asses everywhere.
I just want to puke,
I'm not skinny, I have curves.
What the hell is wrong with that?
that this stanza roflmao:
My doctor tells me,
you are a little overweight.
You fucking idiot,
you don't tell a traumatized teenage girl
shes fat.
I love that you sasid you fucking idiot, you don't tell a traumatized teenage girl shes fat.
roflmao because I have seen this all take place espcially those skinny girls gawd as I hate them when they give ya a once over look and stick their nose in the air n move on and shake their hips side to sid eto get all eyes on them. crap I was stuck behind one of those types in Christmas shoppin at the tacoma mall and OMG I was so fed up and annoyed I wated so badly to slugg her ass! any ways wonderful poem and worthy f 3 clappys. keep on writing. 
Love, Paul =)
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I agree with Pretty Odd. Skinny girls are gross, I'd break them in half! Sorry if that's too vulgar. Get a different doctor. The one you've got is a rude idiot. You can fire doctors...my therapist said I was overweight and I fired her. You are perfect just the way you are. Don't be ashamed and don't ever let anyone tell you other wise. And, above all, show off those curves!
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very deep and honest. i love it. i happen to prefer my women with curves.
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preach it, honey.
i got curves like the backwoods boondocks of a kentucky holler. people just won't look inside and that's the saddest feeling. i can relate to your dilemma and i'm right there with you....
i admire your strength to stand up and say something.
even the tiniest cries scream the strongest to me.
my heart's out to you, dear.
best of luck.
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CURVY PEOPLE RULE THE WORLD ....
from one to another i get this...i think from the time i was in 4th grade till prolly now i was called fat...but when i look at myself back then...i was in shape...and i hate that i let people torture me into eating -bastards-
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