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Anythings Possible

I think its because
i'm forever drowning
in a pit of I'm always
wrong that i use you as
an outlet to vent.

They yell and scream till
i, myself no longer have a
voice of my own.

My outer shell is completely
made of solid brass, but full
of bullets from the shots they
take at me.

The pitter patter of rain is my
only friend nowadays, but even

its against me. With its violent

tongue shooting down from the

heavens above. And booming voice

screeching higher than the ones

i call family.

 

So take me by the arm and lead

me halfway to anywhere, i'd rather

be with you than the place the say

is my home.

Author notes

hmm well i dont know where this came from but its TOTALLY different from the love poems i keep writing always need a change of pace. i would like to thank my favorite band chiodos who i think helped me write this! [onward screamo rock music]

hmm...well since i'm weird and open to anything...i could careless what i am...*gasp* i could be a teddy bear XD;
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  • JustsimplyKatiee.
    August 2, 2008
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    Good luck babe.


  • DeGraw
    July 28, 2008

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    Awh!

    I actually love the rain, but if it sounds like screaming well then I guess it could be obnoxious! Sorry for your troubles!
    Good luck in the contests!
    Regards,
    DeGraw


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    July 26, 2008

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    this is very good, i like the way its very abstract,
    and its not "ooh woe is me my life is over" not cliché aits very original with your wording,
    all my love, best of luck in the contest,
    kitty xxx


  • Poetic Obscenity
    July 24, 2008

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    WOW

    This is absolutley beautiful. It speaks to me on many levels and i've enjoyed it. Thank you for your entry and good luck.


  • Supa Fox
    July 24, 2008

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    This is a beautiful poem. I found the places you chose to start a new line a little odd, but it adds to the dimension of your words. I can definitely relate to this poem. Keep writing, and good luck in the contest ^.^


  • xwarriorXprincessx
    July 24, 2008
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    bittersweet.

    this poem is soft, simple, delicate... yet it screams to me. it reminds me of the music video "Warning" by Incubus.

    i sense the feeling of calling out to someone, anyone. cheers, friend. best of luck. and if no one's listening, sometimes there are kind strangers willing to lend an ear out there. i'm always willing to listen.

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