chrysalis cocoon
living large by butterfly
die larvae
A contest entry
- Teach me how to write a haiku by notorious.
2246 points, ended August 10, 2008, 44 entries
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And only so they can mate and lay eggs... then soon die.
Kinda dark with the die larvae
marlene
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all i can do is smile and sigh...my my my...a butterfly...im seein a purple & black one. you are sooo very very good. i'llalways say that...u always will be
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Shows the whole life & death thing...nice. It's deep for so few words.
Again, there isn't really an "Aha" thing...but brevity is nice.
I like it as a poem.
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It rhymes too. Another no-no. I'm trying to teach you what not to do. lol
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Oh. Well, that's a good way to educate one.
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