melody
in wind-wood forest
hum...
A contest entry
- Teach me how to write a haiku by notorious.
2246 points, ended August 10, 2008, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I like the play here with woodwind and wind-wood... in either case the wind making the sound - a hum, drone, moan
marlene
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Oh..cause I already did. Wow. Delete all these comments!
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Why can't I give you applause?!
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Oops.
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cause I still liked it
Hopping bunnies. -
What if 'hum' became 'hums'?
I like this. Imagery & all that jazz.
Though...I don't see an "Aha" moment.
God. Haiku confuses me.
Suffice to say, I liked this.
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Yea you're right about all that.
This is why I don't win many haiku contests.
But they always inspire something good
so wtf. lol -
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Well, I still liked it as a poem.
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Thanks. That's why I usually have Haiku-like contests...
I just like short poems as you know.
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