His angel
couldn’t protect him;
he harbored storms,
silently,
inside.
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A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 10 Words VI - by Desire.
700 points, ended July 27, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Alone
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ After I read, Loved the words: he harbored storms- and the last two lines grabbed- From the beginning to the ending- I kept seeing a story unfold- where there are negatives that continue to roll in like the tide- and attacking the person- all his or her self worth- Unfortunately Angel could not protect from the tsunami which eventually led to wayward direction- I'm being show how there are people of all ages who have so much going in inside- others may or may not know about- very self destructing whether another metaphor or symbolism~
Hopefully that makes some sense...
Excellent take on the prompt in ten words ~
Powerful images & message You have brought forth
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Thank you for such the great comment and for the silver! It made my day.
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Brilliant take on the prompt .... looking in refection seeing sorrow and pain So much is said in just 10 words.Good luck in this contest.
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