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Sailing

Love is a wind

that is never bound by any shore,

giving hearts a sail

which soars on the beats

of the one

who is your very breath.

 

Though canyons forbid a touch,

even if the earth itself

should dare to raise Himalayas as barriers,

they will never keep

the wings growing

between two souls

from moving towards the same horizon.

 

In the night of silent embraces,

face of the one giving eyes their vision

burns with passion's flame,

kissing always even in distant caresses,

angels visiting pillows

softly light the candle smoldering,

riding dream sailboat to waiting arms.

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    July 25, 2008

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    Borders of oceans can not even stop true love...beauty all over...such lovely imagery and flow...
    Really well done...
    Thank you for your support...
    mystic

    (she will be judging after closing)


  • maralisa silver member
    July 25, 2008

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    kissing always even in distant caresses,angels visiting pillows softly light the candle smoldering,riding dream sailboat to waiting arms.wow I realy loved this poem it has some beautiful imagery and I love the border to good luck in the contest


  • stavykm gold member
    July 24, 2008

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    Just Beautiful

    This is so beautiful. I just love the way I felt when I read your write. The feelings of loving and being loved in spite of circumstances is so bitter sweet. Your poem is so encouraging and the warmth and imagery that just fills your mind and heart with comfort. This is a beautiful encouraging and uplifting poem for her daughter. Wishing you always the best in the contest. Thank you for sharing your gift to write poetry with me.
    Many Blessings
    Much Love
    Kelle Marie


  • StarEyes
    July 24, 2008

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    My Dear brother,

    This is stunning! What a great job you did on this one! It reminded me soooo much of what I feel for and share with one... Beautiful!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta

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