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Sight Delight

Delight, all day, all night
just you alone in sight

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  • Desire gold member
    July 27, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Sight Delight
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ After I read, Loved the word: Delight- and the rhyme You brought forth- for some reason was getting the word: Kentucky so fast it came and went then getting reference to horse races-like Kentucky Derby type of deal- and something about number 5- feels like reference to a horse- then getting word: Plantation- after inhaling Your verse again whether another metaphor or symbolism~
    Hopefully that makes some sense...
    Excellent take on the prompt in ten words ~
    Powerful images & message You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • dustookie2
    July 25, 2008
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    Very lyrical I want to break into song... Good luck in the contest.