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True Love

The butterflies catch me off guard,

almost everything goes numb,

I can feel you.

 

Your holding me the way you always do,

my heart takes flight,

and you're my pilot.

 

You have my trust,

the holder of my heart,

funny how you're the only one I feel for.

 

I don't love you,

I need you,

like Reese's.

 

You're the chocolate,

and I'm your peanut butter,

can't be without each other.

 

My mind is always on you,

thinking about our last hug,

our last kiss.

 

I can't wait to see you tomorrow,

can't wait til I see you in the morning,

what could this be?

 

I've only ever been told about love,

never felt it til now,

you're my pilot with all my trust.

 

You're the only one who could hurt me,

but you choose not to,

love.. what a feeling to have.

Author notes

I fell in love, but it didn't go like the fairy tales say it should. This is about the guy I fell for, the one who I still need.

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Comments

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  • Michael H.
    August 5, 2008
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    Cool Poem. It is a wonderful feeling to be in love. Although it does seem to hurt sometimes.


  • counterculture
    August 5, 2008
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    I thought this was a sweet poem. Simple, but sweet.


  • XxX-Ivy-Love-XxX
    August 5, 2008
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    hm this is very nice. nice wording. and good luck in my contest!♥♥♥♥


  • JustFallingApart
    July 31, 2008
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    nice write

  • Davidlee
    July 25, 2008
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    mmmmmm Reese's


  • XBeautiful MistakeX
    July 25, 2008
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    Awe this is so sweet!! I really hope it works out for you. Thank you for entering!!

    Oz


  • Scared Silly
    July 24, 2008
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    i liked it.... the reese's part was funny lol

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