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Fantasy Land

Tops spin
Imaginations play
Releasing
Fantasy from inside of me

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prompt D: 10 words
Credit: Josephine Wall

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  • Desire gold member
    July 27, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Fantasy Land
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ After I read, Loved the last line- for I kept seeing for some reason a dollhouse- and like barbie car- but then reference to seeing wish list on television- and phrase- wish that was me whether another metaphor or symbolism~
    Now wild as it sounds...reference to Dungeons and Dragons- and phrase; Damsel in distress- Also seeing hand puppets for some reason
    Hopefully that makes some sense...
    Excellent take on the prompt in ten words ~
    Powerful images & message You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    July 25, 2008

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    Great analogy

    Our life can indeed be like a top. We spin into differnet moods of love, happeiness and pain..But these all teach us lessons in life if we listen...


  • dustookie2
    July 25, 2008

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    This makes me smile as I allow my thoughts just to roam around and play. Brilliant take the prompt picture. Good luck. Thank you for the pleasure of the journey.