liquid dreams, condensing into
etheral misty nostalgia
within childish sanctuaries .
Author notes
Credit: Josephine Wall
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 10 Words VI - by Desire.
700 points, ended July 27, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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LOL how do u come up with these? awesome
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Imagination
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ After I read, Loved the reference to liquid dreams and misty nostalgia- for some reason my dictionary is showing -etheral- as ethereal but then not all dictionaries show all alternate spellings of words- also reference to childish sanctuaries- I am reminded of how children can be so creative and take the simplest object- then create an entire fun filled story-without borders- I'm being shown playdough- and how the stick or ball of dough- is transformed into a Masterpiece when completed like so can the Mind-pliable whether another metaphor or symbolism~
Hopefully that makes some sense...
Excellent take on the prompt in ten words ~
Powerful images & message You have brought forth
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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wow great words
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