intertwined our tomorrow's
are locked in
love's hopes and dreams.
Author notes
Quote Inspired...It's you, you're all I see-
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 10 Words VI - by Desire.
700 points, ended July 27, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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So true so true
Yes indeed for each new day is a gift to share forever and a day for those who loves one another in such a way
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Our Tomorrow
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ After I read, Loved the first line and when I was inhaling Your verse- kept seeing like reference to layers- but getting relation to emotions- nowwwwwwww for some reason being shown like light switch- on and off-
whether happy and then sad the next- relationship- up and down- whether metaphor or symbolism Wild as it may seem- seeing a hot air balloon- whether another metaphor or symbolism~
Hopefully that makes some sense...
Excellent take on the prompt in ten words ~
Powerful images & message You have brought forth
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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What a profound senryu this is! You took the prompt and ran with it. Bravo!
Love,
Amera♥
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WoW Let me tell you the part I loved
the most,
" intertwined our tomorrow's
are locked in
love's hopes and dreams. "
That part.
It's so beautiful.
great job.
loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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excellent
wow, such a powerful choice of ten words. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Aww such a wonderful thought. I love it sis!!
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