Loving surrounding sentinel
My safe zone
Amorous passionate heart
Forever shine.
Author notes
Picture prompt A
Please Credit: Josephine Wall
Dedicated to the man who holds me when I fall, the one who makes me feel safe, that same man who lifts my spirits makes me laugh and holds my heart in his hands as I hold his.
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 10 Words VI - by Desire.
700 points, ended July 27, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - - Go for the Gold XVIII - (Pre-Writes...That's Right) by Desire.
700 points, ended August 14, 2008, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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You left me with a sigh firstly because of the emotion this conjured in me and secondly because you poem ended all too soon. Best to you
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Many visuals I get when reading these ten special words...A spiritual tone, of total peace, protection, satisfaction. A passionate tone of deep love found..contentment a light and fire that will never burn out! A wonderful entry for this contest! It is a Gold winner! You have found love, and it is with you to stay dear friend! Beautiful write!
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Welcome Back!!
Magnificent
Your piece qualifies and elated to see You back
Best wishes in my contest Sweet Soul!!
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Aww this was so beautifully penned. So much meaning in such brevity. Great write!
Good luck in the contest
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wonderful
very uplifting and well expressed. A great choice of 10 words. Best of luck in the contest
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Beautiful. Your comment in of itself is poetry as well. You have captured and conveyed very deep emotions beautifully. Well done dear friend.
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Oh Beautiful
Wow this was just breathtaking. I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. The picture had so much more meaning with the depth of heart written in your poem. Thank you for sharing with me. Amazing so much said in so few words. Beautiful poem.
Many Blessings
Much Love
Kelle Marie
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Thank You for Your Time!!
Thank You for Your entry: Loves' Beacon
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ After I read, I kept counting 11 Words
I'm sorry- This is a Beauty of a piece and would have loved to given it a Trophy or HM- but this contest calls for 10 Words only- but I will be having a pre-write contest soon and would Love to see this piece entered
Loved the words: surrounding sentinel also amorous passionate heart While inhaling Your verse I kept being shown a box- reference to oval- and also getting word: Jade-
for some reason- seeing a stain glass image- which appears like it is on the lid-
Getting reference to wedding rings- and for some reason hearing phrase: Father was there at wedding- also getting reference to prenuptials- whether written or in Spirit~whether metaphor or symbolism~
Hopefully that makes some sense...
Excellent take on the prompt in ten words ~
Powerful images & message You have brought forth
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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OMG guess my secret is out knew that extra toe would cause me problems after i had it removed.....phantom's magic ....
not really LMAO 1, 2, 3, 44 a trillion .... or known more commonly as one of those moments when the brain and the fingers dont add up....Sorry hun the mistake was mine. Even worse I did count by saying 2 lines x 3 words = 6 words and 2 lines x 2 words add up to 10.....well my ten and hey when you having a brain fart may as well make it a good one. I do apologize 
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Aaaaaaaaaaaaaw- Beauty this is
I've done it before where I counted so many times I passed out and still miscounted
Nooooooooooo need to apologize-
You penned a Gem- a pre-write contest coming in a few contests- and would Love to see this one again
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Oh My~
I am reading Your words and for some reason keep counting 11 Words-Oy- when this contest calls for 10
I'm still reading entries and will be back- hopefully You will have corrected Best wishes
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This was lovely, beautifully expresssed! Nice work.
~Emily~ xx
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Excellent
Great take on the picture Mook! Such comforting words in this poem. Great job. Don
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Just wonderful
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Beautiful words
of loving sentiment. I'm sure his light will always be bright for you.
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Not bad yourself my lady. Excellent.
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