glasses off
vision blurred
all that's in focus...
is you
Author notes
10 Words
Lyric Prompt:
It's you, you're all I see-
from Queen: You're My Best Friend http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wdt5QwssWY4
For my Beloved. There are times when we're talking or having "alone time" and I would just take off my glasses. I'm nearsighted, so it's true: she becomes all that is in focus, as she should be.
In a list
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 10 Words VI - by Desire.
700 points, ended July 27, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: in focus
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ After I read, Loved the last two lines and while inhaling Your words and energy- the reference: all that's in focus- tugged for even though vision blurred- the Love-Qualities of the one who brings forth sight so to speak- feels there and also in thought- I did not get feeling of just words written but conviction to the meaning of what was penned I kept seeing an Eagle take to skies- though endangered this particular bird- still unafraid to venture- passed poachers who try to *scalp* the word I am getting- creature for its feathers- whether metaphor or symbolism
Hopefully that makes some sense...
Excellent take on the prompt in ten words ~
Powerful images & message You have brought forth
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Amen
All people should speak so well of their significant others. Bravo, Tim.
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This is so precious awwwww. So this is what you see?
I so love you!
you nut
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yes, this is all i care to see.
be thankful i'm not farsighted - you'd have to stand across the room!
i love you too~
your lifetime nut
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I loved these delightful words, i also loved that you choose one of our songs!
You are my Best Friend and my lifetime!
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how could i not? of the pics offered and the lyric prompt...y'know what? i'm gonna add the youtube link to the AN
best friends for lifetime bbfl lol
are we making anyone gag with our mushy love?
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lmbooo Probley but i don't care! lol
You knew i was crying when you got home over missing Nick so now your in the other room trying to make me laugh! I love you for that!
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then perhaps i should join you in the bedroom...
i know, sweetie...i should mention that when my focus is you, that includes the kids...and the cat...and our adopted strays...and your parents...but mostly you!
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LOVE IT! It is true...sometimes you look at someone that means the most to you that's right there in front...and you cant see anything else even if you tried. Very heartfelt 10 words...good luck in the contest!
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Good luck Gnarly Dude
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