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Beacon of My Soul

Orb of my soul
floating
emanating effulgence
lightning my path

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  • Desire gold member
    July 27, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Beacon of My Soul
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ After I read, Love the words: emanating effulgence~ The first line started me on Journey and the last line took it home and I see the word: lightning- and for some reason kept getting lighting- like the extra n might be a hiccup- After reading Your verse I kept seeing a turtle- being turned upside down- as if looked at-inspected- getting reference to box- turtle- whether metaphor or symbolism Also being shown a bottle which looks like one that holds alcohol-appears like an ivory frosted container-and seeing it pushed away
    Hopefully that makes some sense...
    Excellent take on the prompt in ten words ~
    Powerful images & message You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~