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Butterfly Sea

Butterflies emerge
From their captive house
Free into the sea
time ticking past
unleashing the pain
their spirits drain
as they swim off into
the sea of blue skies
soaring free
releasing their beauty into the butterfly sea 

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photo prompt: 29-50 words
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  • Sin with a grin
    July 25, 2008
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    love it 2

    A lovely and trueful poem


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 24, 2008

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    A lovely thought! Like a metaphor for our spirits as butterflies, releasing the pain and finally being able to soar free. Great take!