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She Who Knows the Widow Spider

She who knows how to make the right use of the heart
A queen of the dead and gone, of the poor and meek
One who has died many times over, who'll continue to

Teetering on the brink with such sorrow apart
A brother, the only other, torn from life by the bleak
In love that she breathes with a heart that bleeds

Granted wings to protect against evil untrue
She couldn't save her own of sameness to depart
As a ruler of Death, she couldn't protect, to bespeak

Choking on tears mottled grey, her face turning blue
Lamenting a loss so severe her sons she misleads
She holds what is left, but without faith or fight

Gently carressing a broken black spider, she pleads
For a god more powerful than she for her pain to take flight.

Author notes

Isis, if you couldn't quite tell.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Isis

Keats Sonnet

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  • NooNiThEWitcH
    July 28, 2008

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    Interesting poem and nicely done.. great flow throughout and good job.

    Thank you for entering, keep on writing and good luck.

    Nooni