she seeks refuge in alone,
teetering precariously
between yesterday and tomorrow
while wisps of forever
cling tentatively
to broken dreams
and shattered promises
left strewn
on a sidewalk of despair
Author notes
Picture Prompt ~ http://zemotion.deviantart.com/art/Forgotten-Fairytales-58397032
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt (PIF) by kiwigirljacks.
850 points, ended July 24, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - BATTLE OF THE GOLDS THREE by Swan song.
2000 points, ended October 5, 2008, 47 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is no less than tremendous!!!! I enoyed the flow and content of this sensational penning
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Score! You kicked this one straight between the goals hun, awesome, and congrats on the gold as well!
Love and peace always,
mj.
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Thank you.
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Oh what a spot on take of this picture! You really looked into this so deeply and came up with the perfect words.
Congratulations on your well deserved gold
Gaylene
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Thank you Gaylene for stopping by and commenting. I really enjoyed letting my muse loose on this one. Juls
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Yay anothergold and so beautifully described.you are getting good atthe quickies now i want to see you do Long Long ones too!
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Yay another gold and so beautifully described. You are getting good at the quickies now i want to see you do Long Long ones too!
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You have captured the essence of what I saw in this picture, and your words are perfectly chosen to reflect this. This hit me hard also as I see so much of myself in your write! I often seek refuge in alone...
Excellent write that really spoke to me!
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Thank you so much for the Gold Trophy.. The picture prompt really got my muse going, no thoughts just words that had to be written.
Juls
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How beautifully sad...lost in the past and the future, leave a soul to be lost forever...
I wonderful write in thought and sorrow...
Best to you~
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