dreams once sealed in the vestiges of time
wash upon the transcendent shores of life
renewed passion, sparked by imagination
released once more to ascend anew
breathing fresh the air of the coming day
Author notes
Credit Artist:
http://lady-symphonia.deviantart.com/art/Seawinds-brought-it-to-me-90097893
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt (PIF) by kiwigirljacks.
850 points, ended July 24, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nice!
This has a lot of hope to it. Starting with renewed vigor to chas a dream. I like this one a lot. Good work, Tim.
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This has such a soft feel to it.. it's like the washing anew of the soul to breathe again and embrace the dreams that we once thought were lost in time. Beautifully done!
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A write of hope and tomorrows freedom...
beautiful flow and word choice,from word one, till the end..."breathing fresh the air of the coming day"
this is the line I love...It makes the write so positive...
Best to you~
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This is really good!*smile*
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I'm not surprised this rocks! I just knew it would. hehe
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GREAT WRITE. Your language is brilliant. Vestiges...transcendent...anew. Brilliant use. I love how this is simple in 5 lines...great take on the photo. The butterfly will be let out once again...
"renewed passion, sparked by imagination
released once more to ascend anew"
Xia, you are GREAT my friend. GREAT.
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We chose the same pic--groovy.
"dreams once sealed in the vestiges of time"
NICE. 'sealed' works physically with the pick, & bringing dreams & time as elements is good.
"sparked by imagination"
Or..."imagination's sparks/released once more to ascend anew"
Do you like my edit?
This whole thing had excellent flow...good luck & awesome job!!
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