Locked away are precious souls
kept caged from life's tainted hands,
and forever immortal in Time's bottle.
{Years go by unnoticed,
yet days are spent in sand.}
Long awaited for their prince
do they escape in fetal attempts
because souls do expire through out time.
Was never meant to be ~
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Comments
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Are now this made me think of how we cocoon our souls at times to not allow anything that my taint us out of fear... hoping for something special to come along and rescue us.. only to find that time passes quickly for those not free in spirit and we end up alone, instead of taking risks that may perhaps lead to our freedom. Excellent take!
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Very deep and interesting write...
"because souls do expire through out time."
that is a wonderful line...very well done and expressed...
Best to you~
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