When I touched you, you melted under my sweet caress.
Feeling so very loved and blessed, as I move my hands on
You strategically like a game of chess.
When I touched you I had only two hands but when I touched you,
They turned into many caress, as I see you exhale in bliss,
Leaning over you to kiss every each of your wonder body.
When you touched me, I felt as though I was being lifted into the sky,
As though I was soaring very high.
When you touched me I got this feeling of being complete,
Honey to you I surrender in defeat.
When you touched me all I wanted was more, honey its your
Sweet loving I truly adore.
When we both touched each other we sigh in bliss,
As we share our last loving kiss.
When I touched you, it was last time before you were to be in
Gods Kingdom and die.
When you touched me, you said you'll be alright, please don't cry.
When we touched each other it was our way of saying goodbye.
Author notes
Hope its okay,
A contest entry
- when I touched you... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended July 28, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Cumm and Play by sensualbutterfly.
775 points, ended August 22, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Artistic Seduction. by Poetryintheblood.
550 points, ended February 3, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you for your most beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Very sweet. Too sweet for what I was looking for but thank you for the entry anyway
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The description is very much thoughtful to define the journey of the love...well done..and my thanks for sharing such a wonderful write in my contest...
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Awww
That's freaking gorgeous! It's so ..beautiful. I can feel it, deep down inside. You know? Amazing. Great write. Very sweet.
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