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Becoming the new God

let the blood fall upon
your worthless souls of hatred
drown your tears in it
die in it
feast in it
awaken the demons that slept so long inside
unleashed the darkness that consumes all
let every step you take
become an antagonizing Ora that kills
choking those whose hated you
killing those who laughed in your face
let your eyes pierce them with death and fear
make them remember who you were
lead them into a holocaust
make them see what you see
fill them with your pain
throw away the pieces of your heart
that's been shattered over and over again
like broken mirrors
let the angels above fall onto the ground you stand upon
only to leave you never falling
only rising above to the heavens gate
making it your own
rip the clouds open
with your hands of deception
blackened them forever
darkened the sun that burns your eyes
make this world yours
become the new god
in this new time

sorry about this poem, its just how i felt, this poem makes me laugh

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  • xxUnSpokenxx
    July 26, 2008

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    This is very good ^_^
    Words used very well.. Its like a game with words, I like it very much


  • Boxingboy
    July 25, 2008
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    well it's cool but then very creepy

    well i hope you feel better sis and i hope that you'll always feel good and not bad i hope

  • mightyafrowhitey
    July 24, 2008

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    I've defnately felt like this many times. Hell, I may even feel like this now. Ripping the clouds open...Angels falling to the ground...Yea, pretty funny.


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    July 24, 2008
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    Wow interesting but i loved it alot. :]


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    July 24, 2008
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    Coolio i love this its a great write


  • edit my world.
    July 24, 2008

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    ooo...*shivers* a powerful write chick...
    this was awesome on so many levels...this poem kinda made me laugh and idk why...hmm eh well

    kick ass write!

    Dani♥

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