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Nothing




I can hear your voice, but you are too far away
I’m dizzy, my mind is hazy
My head spinning, spiraling out of control
Landing every time, on thoughts of you

I reach out, but you’ve turned away
The aching in my heart verbalized, you ignore my cries
Pushing further, as you walk in the wrong direction
Refusing to come back to my heart

I’m not in love with you, the words echo
Bouncing off the core of me, forcing me to my knees
I don’t want to be obligated, another knife to my soul
I am nothing without you by my side, I counter

I am nothing



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life hurts..... but "live and let live" right?

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  • Haygood gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    Touching

    Been there...Done that...
    Thanks for your comments on my poem. I write mine with a twist at the end.

  • Diriangeny
    November 3, 2008

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    Very sad... I loved it

    I must say, I am in a similar situation right now and is never easy... if that is something you're experiencing now, I'm sorry, hope time will heal... Marvel


    • SeptemberFaith
      November 3, 2008
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      Yeah.. those are words actually said to me. The most painful words I've ever heard. But life gives us pain so we could know happiness.

      I hope that your heart heals also.

      Criss : )


  • Dishy
    July 25, 2008

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    You have described what we all go through at sometime in our life that feeling of nothingness .We all may have different reasons for it or where we pin the blame but the feelings are the same i think . Sad write but a good one