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A Heart's Symphony

Music from a locked chest,
beautiful in its impossibility -
the broken music box plays
and bursts into symphony.

A mended drum's beating,
breaking everlasting silence,
lays a foundation for the arias
in this opera of insanity.

Cracked violins sing their swansong
as the drums continue on;
chordless harps repaired with heartstrings -
what shall happen when they break?

Author notes

I'm a bit rusty, but I'm happy with how this turned out. You see, I don't write forced words. I just let my fingers do the typing and then I look at what comes out.

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  • Keelathis
    July 30, 2008
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    Shakkakkan

    Good to see youre bouncing back dear. Happy for ya. Course I never applaud.


    • Misfortune
      July 31, 2008
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      Shakkakkan? xD

      Eh, it's not really personal. Kind of something that made me feel better by writing it. You know how ridiculous I can get.

  • daydreamer09x
    July 25, 2008
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    AWESOME!

    FINALLY a new poem by Misfortune! I love it! Great job