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Sam seeing Bella

Searching for a girl
she was the one flirting with Jacob
just a few months before.
Where is she?
Her name is being called,
I could smell her easily
find her if I turn.
She's crumpled near the tree
her face ashen and blood gone.
eyes staring blankly,
no intelligence, no life
she whispers a name
eyes frantic in search.
It would have been better
if blood were everywhere.

Author notes

I wanted to write a poem in Sam's Perspective....and this was what came out.

Option 2. Sam's Perspetive. KaseyL. Team Edward.

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  • Silent Emotions
    July 28, 2008
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    i think this is the 3rd piece ive read of yours and im totally digging this one too. great write

  • Missa
    July 25, 2008
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    great! I love how you did it from sam, i dont think ive ever seen one from him yet!