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accepting my award



when they award me my trophy
someone else has to accept it
in their beautiful hands
for mine are stabbed and dry

these hands that make amazing pieces
only work with the ugly and hurtful
but how else should i be
when that is all the world has to offer

i will buy the wine
and drink it through a straw

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7. Celebrating excellence in thorn sculpting

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  • penman gold member
    July 25, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest


  • dustookie2
    July 25, 2008

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    I like where your lines have taken me with this poem the imagery projects lingering thought. Great take on the prompt. Good luck in the contest.


  • BehindTheShadow
    July 24, 2008
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    I really like what you did with this prompt. Good luck!